Media Pitch Questionnaire Concluded Feedback

Idea 1

Good Points:

From the feedback we received it was commented that there was good contrast between innocence and a darker setting. People also favoured the title sequence which we would create out of children's spelling blocks.

Bad Points:

The bad points brought up in concern was that the storyline switching between different time periods would be confusing for the audience.

Suggested Improvements:

The only suggested improvement was that the child in the plot should be older in the present time period.

Idea 2

Good Points:

People liked this idea because it had more ideas packed into it; they liked using a mirror as a prop as it is commonly found in thrillers and can be a really good element to create a creepy, tension building effect. They also pointed out how there was a good clear contrast in this idea which will help it keep interesting.

Bad Points:

The bad point mentioned was that jumping between dreams and reality might not be clear and could confuse things for the audience.

Suggested Improvements:

Suggested improvements was that jumping between dream and reality needs to be ensured it is clear to the audience.

Idea 3

Good Points:

The main feature that people liked in this idea is the mystery with it and characters being anonymous.

Bad Points:

This idea was stated to be less exciting than the others.

Suggested Improvements:

There where no suggested improvements given for this idea.